Phormis Hall

                                      Positive Review:

This entry is about the getting and puzzle behind a charm. The puzzle displayed in the entry is extremely intriguing and keeps the peruser needing to know more. The exchange and depiction are incredible while the entry itself is anything but difficult to peruse. The section closes well as it leaves right around a cliffhanger of what's going to happen next.

                                      Negative review:

This entry is about the getting and puzzle behind a charm. The entry is a portion from the story so there is some trouble in attempting to comprehend what is occurring. The mind-set of the section is by all accounts practically bleak and dim with the depictions introduced. It takes two or three times to rehash to completely get a handle on what is going on. This turns out to be a significant aggravation particularly when we achieve the end of the entry where there is no positive conclusion.